My Term 4 Goal

PI Matrix

Expert
    Shows weeks of work
    Audience is very interested
    I've done the work myself
    Research in my words – with my personality in it
    Contains humour(?)
    Interaction with the audience
    Speech is confident, clear and with action and expression

Practititioner
    Shows three or four weeks of work
    Contains pictures and steps
    Information is interesting and in my own words
    Adults have supported me without doing work for me
    Some humour
    Some interaction
    Audience is attentive
    Speech is clear

Apprentice
    Shows about a week’s work
    A little information – some in my own words
    Adults have done some of it for me
    No interaction with the audience
    No humour
    Poor presentation
    Few pictures

Novice
    Reads the words on the PowerPoint or Glog

       Clearly started at the last minute

    Hardly any info
    Parents have done a lot of it for me
    No pictures or steps
    Copied straight off the internet
    No humour
    Not finished on time
    Untidy presentation
    Speech is not very clear

I think that I'm an expert.

Feed-Back For My PI

Mike & Linda: I found it interesting that you put weetbix in with the food. Instead of
a heap of videos find a way of making one.


Britt & Harry: I thought it was really funny when Hannah’s dad nearly threw the poo
at the camera. You needed to learn your lines a bit better and it would be better on
one whole presentation.


Alan & Kate: I like it when you interviewed the dog. You need to speak more
clearly.


Sophie & Lucy: I thought that you showed great personality and humour. You could
have put in a few more facts.


Natalya & Kennedy: I like how you had different people involved. Next time try to
get it onto one presentation.


Kale & Zia: I like how you made it funny and interesting even if you weren’t
interested in the topic. I thought you should work on putting more facts about the
breed not just your dog.


Chaz & Aidan: You were fair and honest and you put a lot of effort into it. You
should either do one big video or link them.


Sara & Alana: It was good because you actually had the type of dog. You could have
talked louder and more clearly.


Libby & Libby: You had really good humour and it was interesting. You needed to
speak more clearly.


Kelly & Emma: I like how you used the microphone. I thought because your topic
was on the breed you could have given us more information about it.


Caleb & Maddy: You obviously really enjoyed doing it and you had great info and
facts and you made it really interesting. I think you might have needed some more
info.


Hadley & Ollie: I like how you made the dog talk. I think next time you should
make it into one whole movie.


Corbie & Egg: You had good facts and humour which made it interesting as I wasn’t
really looking forward to a dog topic. You should have practiced more before you
recorded.


Nat & Luce: It was very interesting and you had lots of detail in your facts. You
could have talked more clearly and louder because when you were walking away
from the camera we couldn’t hear you.


Thomas & Grace: You really honestly must have loved the topic. It was interesting,
funny, amazing PI on the cutest little dog. I loved it. I think you needed to speak
louder.


Mum & Dad:  I think you did an awesome job with the camera Hannah.  You should have explained to everyone at the start that it was recorded on a normal camera with only a small amount of video space - and not on a video recorder.  This meant you had to get quite close to be heard on it cos the sound quality is not great on it and also that you had to do several small videos so all the space wasn't used up.  Fantastic attempt!


My feed-back (Hannah):  I had fun doing it and I think that I chose an interesting topic but next time I need to speak a bit clearer.

Term 3 Home Fun Percentage

I got 86%.  I was hoping for at least 90% because last time I got about 92% so I think that my term 4 goal (Get 100% for HF) Will help me.

Term 3 Goal

My goal was to be more confident with my speaking and I think that I achieved that goal because now i'm not that scared to talk in front of a large audience. 

The Terrible Weather

W.A.L.T: Put it all together.

PLAN: 

Lightning and Thunder.  Tree fell over.  Big truck.  Something chopping up the wood.  We got free wood at the and.  They made the fence.  The fence was chipped.  Mr Merriman. Scary.  I took photos.  Windy.  Dad said we could of pushed it over.  Old.  Snapped not uprooted.  Saw dust.  It looks way different.  Noisy.  Building people.  Bright orange jackets.

STORY:

While I was school I checked my emails and Mum sent me an email that said Mr Merriman's tree fell down!  When I got home I noticed that it chipped the fence,  Dad said that they made that fence so I felt sorry for them.  It was a really old tree though, So I think we could probably push it over.  CRASH BANG BOOM! I can hear the lightning and thunder booming down from the sky like a Radio on full boar.  'I don't like it when there's lots of rain and we have to stay inside' I said to Mum.  So I  ran as fast as I could to get out of this boring house to the fascinating outdoors and took some photos of the  People carefully cutting down the tree.  They were wearing bright Orange jackets and they also had a big Yellow machine that they used to grind the big bulky wood and make it into Saw Dust.  Once they were finished they let us have some of the wood.  I helped Mr Merriman and Dad bring it in.  I was dressed up in some of my best clothes because I was going out for dinner but I got Saw Dust all over me so I had to go upstairs and brush myself off.  The next day I went outside when it was fine again and it looks quite different now because I'm used to a big tree outside their house that I can climb up.  A while after that I went out the back of OUR house and one of our small fruit trees had fallen over.  Luckily it uprooted and we could push it back into place.  'At least our tree didn't fall over as well' Mum said. (It was rotten so It probably would if it was windy enough)  The wind was still blowing for the rest of the day.

My Best Writing Term 3

One day I was at my Nana's house and unexpectedly my dad drove there withe a cute little dog! His name was Charlie and he is a Cavalier King Charles Spaniel . Charlie has a brother called Fred and sadly the got separated from each other. We have had charlie for five years now. Hes not very playful mostly sleepy. we got heaps of toys but he never plays with them so that was a wast of money. I think charlie is the best dog in the world. If we had him since he was born i wold of named him Mr Snuffles because he sniffles EVERYTHING. My friend Danielle and i used to call him super vacuum cleaner a few years ago , then he ate any food that fell on the floor. Charlie always chases flies and birds. I think that Charlie is a really fast dog when we take him for walks but when were at home he is always lazy and sleeps all day. My parents and I always call him little walie dog.

This is my best piece of writing because I made it interesting for the reader and added weird facts about my dog Charlie.

My Best Visual Language Term 3

What did I do well: I used bright and dull colors to make it stand out. (The scanner made it fade) 

What did I learn: That I need to make the title relate to the topic.

My next step: To color evenly.

Maths Videos

 

 

 

 

I think that I did quite well because we tried to work out the answers first and we used the strategy that T.C told us and it works out quite well if you don't know it because you use your times tables to work it out.  Next time we needed to ex plane it a bit clearer. 

Peter Spelling Test

I think I did quite well in my test because I got a percentage of 13yr which is quite good because I'm only nine.  Next time I need to take more time on some of my words.

Maths Tests Term 3

I didn't do very on my times tables because I had to resit my test my test but after that I got them all right.  I did better than I expected with my divisions because I got 92%.  I'm glad that I passed all on my tests though.

Wallet S.C

Senior Sky Scrapers Fitness Results

I think I did quite well because I've never done it before but next time I need to focus on getting faster because I didn't improve in some of them but some of the others were a big improvement.  Next year (If we do it) I'm defiantly going to try and get a better score every time. 

My Toon Doo

a walk through the park by Hanny115 | Make your own at www.toondoo.com

Emma and I did quite well making out Toon Doo but we needed to make the story connect to the comic, Next time we might need to add some more detail to our scenes so the reader knows what is going on.

Self Assessments

Self assessments need to have what you did well, your next step, What you were doing, and how you achieved your goal.

In my self assessments I forgot to add my next step in some of them but I did add what I did well and what I didn't do well.

Measurement And Capacity

I think I didn't do very well because I didn't get many right because I guessed some of them but I did well on the first page.
My next step is to use problem solving to work out my answers.

My Interveiw Sheet Term 3

I did well at my interview because I spoke clearly and I got good marks.

My Term 3 PI Matrix

Expert
    Shows weeks of work
    Audience is very interested
    I've done the work myself
    Research in my words – with my personality in it
    Contains humour(?)
    Interaction with the audience
    Speech is confident, clear and with action and expression

Practititioner
    Shows three or four weeks of work
    Contains pictures and steps
    Information is interesting and in my own words
    Adults have supported me without doing work for me
    Some humour
    Some interaction
    Audience is attentive
    Speech is clear

Apprentice
    Shows about a week’s work
    A little information – some in my own words
    Adults have done some of it for me
    No interaction with the audience
    No humour
    Poor presentation
    Few pictures

Novice
    Reads the words on the PowerPoint or Glog

Clearly started at the last minute

    Hardly any info
    Parents have done a lot of it for me
    No pictures or steps
    Copied straight off the internet
    No humour
    Not finished on time
    Untidy presentation
    Speech is not very clear

I think I did quite well because the audience was interested and everyone got to have something.

I needed to speak with a little bit more confidence though. 

Term 3 PI Feed Back

aidan's eportfolio said...

good pi cool idea about your choc fish

 

CaelumTahiwi said...

Good PI Hannah you did really well you had lots of info and those fish you caught from new world were very good

 

Kale Eriksson said...

good pi hannah we thought it was very tasty now our favourite fish is the choclate fihs to

 

TC said...

Great presentation, Hannah. You were well organised and provided some varied and interesting aspects to a very good topic. The chocolate fish provided some good humour. Nice work, Hannah.

 

louisemg said...

I thought your PI was a very interesting topic Hannah. You had some well thought of questions and presented your PI very well. I liked how you had some cards so that you could face the class while you spoke. Next time, try to speak a little more slowly, and pause after each question so that people can think about and absorb what you said. Great work, well done!

 

sophie's 2010eportfolio said...

great pi hannah that was really cool you had some good information and that was a yummy pi to and those teeth were huge nice work Sophie,Sara

 

Emma Smith said...

Emma- That was a AWESOME PI Hannah you picked a really good topic and you put lots of information so well done Hannah! Linda-very good it was yummy but one thing why did you put the blue thing on it? , but well done.

 

oliverbh said...

Well done Hannah!!! Tasty Mmmm!!! Question how big was the blue shark!!

Kate W said...

WOW! Cool P.I Hannah! We really enjoyed it! We really liked how you had little Q-card to help you read the info! And We liked the chocolate fish! THANKS HANNAH Libby,Kate,Chaz

zmacdermidefolio said...

cool PI Hannah. you had lots of picture and you put it in your own words.Next time add more info. but we liked your PI. Zia, Grace

Alanas e portfolio said...

Natalya good idea and tasty PI it was really interesting we injoyed it heaps Alana It was a really good P.I it was very nice of you to give us the Chocolate Fish

 

Brittany Spencer said...

Cool PI Hannah, we LOVED the chocolate fishys! You pictures and an article from the news paper which was good aswell. Next time: Make your writing on the board easier to read and maybe some more information. And face the audience, learn your cue cards of by heart. Great PI Hannah PS: Yummy choc fishys and thanks for giving them to us! Britt and Luce =)

 

Nathalie said...

That was a tasty PI hannah.It was cool how you showed us the sharks jaws and we liked seeing the sharks teeth.We also liked the photos.You spoke very clearly but next time you could give a little more contact.Well done hannah! Nat and kelly =)

Alan Kirk said...

cool and nice fishing skills from new world

Home Fun Percentage For Term 2

I got 90% for my home fun percentage for term 2.

I think I did really well because last term I got 88%.

The improvement in my percentage is really good because I got 100 Snidges this time.

Term 2 Goal Description

My Goal Is To Be More Brave

I chose a good goal because its challenging but i achieved it.

In term 1 I used this goal as well because I thought it was a good goal and because I could use it to make me have more confidence in myself for things like Drama comps and school productions.

The being more brave poster that I made to show my goal gives me confidence to be more brave. 

Archimedes Maths Sample

I Did well on this because it explanes how I worked it out clearly and its Bold so you can see it.

Bouncer The Alien

WALT: describe... with voice
Bouncer Is an alien on the planet Boingo. He is tall and skinny with one foot to bounce on all day. Bouncer lives with his mum, dad, big sister and little brother. They're all boingies. His Mums name is Skits, his dads name is Booker, his Big sisters name is Splat And his little brothers name is Biff Booker. Bouncer has no head, only one beautiful blue eye sticking out of his long neck. His skin is smooth like a roes petals and as green as grass in spring. He has a big long toung about as long as the Ifall tower in France. Bouncer always wears his favorite cardie that his Nana made him, (It's blue with a picture of him on it.) He always listens to the radio singing along to his favorite song, Disco Aliens.Boingies like Bouncer speak in code and they say stuff like "Buzaca poof zizminga!" That is boingo for "Hi how are you?"

Natures Forces Experment

We needed to make the house a bit bigger and stronger rather than nice things around the sides to make it look nice.

Natures Forces Glog

I think Emma and I did quite well but we needed to put more info into it.

My knowledge Test Term 2

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I needed to do the easy ones first because i got my minuses and pluses wrong.

My Term 2 Feed-Back For My PI

cool pi hannah i think you put a lot of effort in to it.- kale
Very interesting Hannah, I like how it was about pottery.- Ollie
Well done Hannah i like the big pot and it will even look cooler when it is panted well done Hannah!!!!!!!!! -Hadley caleb
well done hannah it was fantastic. that was awseome i think i should give that a try and it was very good -emma & linda
cool pi.cool pots.- Aidan,Thomas
great pi Hannah you taught me a bit about
pottery!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!- Sara
Good Job Hannah it was interesting the one that you did home was a bit fingerish.... Pottery was a very good topic to choose next time speak louder and clearer!- Britt
Great PI Hannah loved the pots and how you made them but next time talk louder great pi -Luce and Grace
Awesome P.I Hannah. Your pots were beautiful and amazing. Our favourite was your hand made it was fantastic!!! -Corbin,Mike
Great topic and idea Hannah but try not to make your voice wobble -Maddy and Zia
great clay pots Hannah and it really looks like you put allot of effort into it so congrats Hannah!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! -caelum
My Feed back- I think I did quite well but next ill speak a bit louder and clearer.

My Term Two Goal

I still need to be a little bit more brave because I'm still scared of things like bugs and sometimes coming last in races.

My Home Learning Persentige For Term One

I Got 88 Percent,

I think I did quite well because i took time to august to the dead line board.

My Maths Sample

I Think I Did Quite Well because I Got The Answers Right but I made heaps of mistakes.

My best Visual Language

This is my best visual language because I put my personality into it and it has bold and bright colors to make it stand out.

My Wordle

Natalya, Lucy, Linda, Alana and I did quite well on this because we put lots of words into it and they all have something to do with QZealand.

My Interview Sheet

I did well at my interview and I didn't make any mistakes in the sheet.

My Bank Account

Hannah's Bank Account

My Maths Tests

I needed to concentrate more because I was too focused on the time that I'd not finish everything and guessed some of the answers.

my smarts

My smart is body smart and that's probably true because I like doing physical activities and playing out doors.

My Goal For Term One

I Think I achieved my goal because I did drama again this year ans you have to speak in front of a big audience in lots of different voices.

My Knowledge Test

What did i learn: To give everything a go
What did I do well: Finished everything
My next step: Try to learn my divisions because i guessed

My averages in over arm tennis ball throwing

What I did learn: How to hold a tennis ball properly.
What I was good at: I threw the ball past my goal of 20 meters and threw 24.
My next step: To throw past 24 meters.

My First Hand Writing This Year

What I did well: I used bold bright beautiful colors (bbbc)
My Next Step: Don't draw stick figgers
What I learn' t : To color dark so the visual language for the poem on the other page wont show through.

My EPortfolio

Hi I'm Hannah And As You Can See I'm Very Exited About Showing You My 2010 EPortfolio.