Sunday, July 25, 2010

Term 3 PI Feed Back

aidan's eportfolio said...
good pi cool idea about your choc fish
 
CaelumTahiwi said...
Good PI Hannah you did really well you had lots of info and those fish you caught from new world were very good
 
Kale Eriksson said...
good pi hannah we thought it was very tasty now our favourite fish is the choclate fihs to
 
TC said...
Great presentation, Hannah. You were well organised and provided some varied and interesting aspects to a very good topic. The chocolate fish provided some good humour. Nice work, Hannah.
 
louisemg said...
I thought your PI was a very interesting topic Hannah. You had some well thought of questions and presented your PI very well. I liked how you had some cards so that you could face the class while you spoke. Next time, try to speak a little more slowly, and pause after each question so that people can think about and absorb what you said. Great work, well done!
 
sophie's 2010eportfolio said...
great pi hannah that was really cool you had some good information and that was a yummy pi to and those teeth were huge nice work Sophie,Sara
 
Emma Smith said...
Emma- That was a AWESOME PI Hannah you picked a really good topic and you put lots of information so well done Hannah! Linda-very good it was yummy but one thing why did you put the blue thing on it? , but well done.
 
oliverbh said...
Well done Hannah!!! Tasty Mmmm!!! Question how big was the blue shark!!
Kate W said...
WOW! Cool P.I Hannah! We really enjoyed it! We really liked how you had little Q-card to help you read the info! And We liked the chocolate fish! THANKS HANNAH Libby,Kate,Chaz
zmacdermidefolio said...
cool PI Hannah. you had lots of picture and you put it in your own words.Next time add more info. but we liked your PI. Zia, Grace
Alanas e portfolio said...
Natalya good idea and tasty PI it was really interesting we injoyed it heaps Alana It was a really good P.I it was very nice of you to give us the Chocolate Fish
 
Brittany Spencer said...
Cool PI Hannah, we LOVED the chocolate fishys! You pictures and an article from the news paper which was good aswell. Next time: Make your writing on the board easier to read and maybe some more information. And face the audience, learn your cue cards of by heart. Great PI Hannah PS: Yummy choc fishys and thanks for giving them to us! Britt and Luce =)
 
Nathalie said...
That was a tasty PI hannah.It was cool how you showed us the sharks jaws and we liked seeing the sharks teeth.We also liked the photos.You spoke very clearly but next time you could give a little more contact.Well done hannah! Nat and kelly =)
Alan Kirk said...
cool and nice fishing skills from new world
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15 comments:

  1. aidan's eportfolioJuly 28, 2010 at 3:31 PM

    good pi cool idea about your choc fish

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  2. CaelumTahiwiJuly 28, 2010 at 3:31 PM

    Good PI Hannah you did really well you had lots of info and those fish you caught from new world were very good

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  3. Kale ErikssonJuly 28, 2010 at 3:31 PM

    good pi hannah we thought it was very tasty now our favourite fish is the choclate fihs to

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  4. AnonymousJuly 28, 2010 at 3:32 PM

    Great presentation, Hannah. You were well organised and provided some varied and interesting aspects to a very good topic. The chocolate fish provided some good humour. Nice work, Hannah.

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  5. louisemgJuly 28, 2010 at 3:32 PM

    I thought your PI was a very interesting topic Hannah. You had some well thought of questions and presented your PI very well. I liked how you had some cards so that you could face the class while you spoke. Next time, try to speak a little more slowly, and pause after each question so that people can think about and absorb what you said. Great work, well done!

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  6. sophie's 2010eportfolioJuly 28, 2010 at 3:32 PM

    great pi hannah that was really cool you had some good information and that was a yummy pi to and those teeth were huge nice work Sophie,Sara

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  7. Emma SmithJuly 28, 2010 at 3:32 PM

    Emma- That was a AWESOME PI Hannah you picked a really good topic and you put lots of information
    so well done Hannah!
    Linda-very good it was yummy but one thing why did you put the blue thing on it? , but well done.

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  8. AnonymousJuly 28, 2010 at 3:32 PM

    Well done Hannah!!! Tasty Mmmm!!! Question how big was the blue shark!!

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  9. Kate WJuly 28, 2010 at 3:32 PM

    WOW! Cool P.I Hannah! We really enjoyed it! We really liked how you had little Q-card to help you read the info!
    And We liked the chocolate fish! THANKS HANNAH
    Libby,Kate,Chaz

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  10. zmacdermidefolioJuly 28, 2010 at 3:33 PM

    cool PI Hannah. you had lots of picture and you put it in your own words.Next time add more info. but we liked your PI.

    Zia, Grace

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  11. Alanas e portfolioJuly 28, 2010 at 3:33 PM

    Natalya good idea and tasty PI it was really interesting we injoyed it heaps

    Alana It was a really good P.I it was very nice of you to give us the Chocolate Fish

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  12. Britt SpencerJuly 28, 2010 at 3:34 PM

    Cool PI Hannah, we LOVED the chocolate fishys!
    You pictures and an article from the news paper which was good aswell.

    Next time: Make your writing on the board easier to read and maybe some more information. And face the audience, learn your cue cards of by heart.

    Great PI Hannah
    PS: Yummy choc fishys and thanks for giving them to us!
    Britt and Luce =)

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  13. NathalieJuly 28, 2010 at 3:34 PM

    That was a tasty PI hannah.It was cool how you showed us the sharks jaws and we liked seeing the sharks teeth.We also liked the photos.You spoke very clearly but next time you could give a little more contact.Well done hannah!

    Nat and kelly =)

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  14. Alan KirkJuly 28, 2010 at 3:35 PM

    cool and nice fishing skills from new world

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  15. Hannah ZJuly 28, 2010 at 9:33 PM

    Reply to Ollie: It was a 12 foot School Shark

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