Tuesday, August 10, 2010

My Toon Doo

Emma and I did quite well making out Toon Doo but we needed to make the story connect to the comic, Next time we might need to add some more detail to our scenes so the reader knows what is going on.

1 comment:

  1. You have a good idea about what you've done well and what you need to do better. You are a good thinker, Hannah.

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